Monday, 21 May 2012

I have a dog. Her name is Blackie. She lives in a kennel . I play with her at the beach with my cousin and my brother . She has a swim at the beach. We take her for a run back  home . She eats meat, dog food and bones.
We play with her at home and she was running after me. I ran inside to get away 
from her. She was barking at me and she ran inside too .

1 comment:

Mele L said...

Hello Semi It is mele I really like your story.But there are to many fullstops near each other.Also you have short sentence.Next time I hope you have more longer sentence but keep it up.Remember Champions never give up.

Bye Mele

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